Annihilate your taciturn heart with
The words that threaten to erupt from
Your trembling lips.
Suppress your meaningless thoughts
By tossing secrets at
All who show interest
Breath deeply,
Feel numbness,
Let it envelope you completely.
This is the only way to
Maintain all
Illusion of control.
I loved how the poem flowed
ReplyDeleteLove the words you use
Like the ending
the third paragraph is great.
Rand Hillyer
i loved this poem. i liked how you used a couple words to say a lot because a lot of the times people use a lot of words and dont say anything
ReplyDeleteit had a good meaning behide it well on what i got. It had a good pace to it and how contorl can be real but yet it is also an illusion as well.
ReplyDeleteI love your word choice alot
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