She lost it when she was gone
Once she came the love was found
Now she lays wake
She catches her breath
Laying there wake
Wondering why her
Now that love have come
She lay there wake
Thinking of that person
Loving the starts at heart
But once she wakes up
Nothing no love waiting
Now she can’t catch her breath
The day has come and gone
Still no love
She opened her heart
Not the love came and
She can breathe with air
Of love
There was a lot of repetition. Was that intentional? I liked the brevity of the lines. It gave the impression that it was difficult to breathe.
ReplyDeletei like this. its really pretty. i think its talking about heart break right? either way its beautiful
ReplyDeleteI agree with Sierra. The length of the lines was perfect for the subject matter - it felt like one shallow, unsatisfying breath at a time.
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